- Removed truncated axis
- Replaced tick marks with opaque & translucent bars to intuitively indicate that the numbers are %s of a whole (as opposed to integers with a unit)
- Included fewer countries/groups of countries
+ Revision 1
All countries in the EU28 are removed, the EU28 remains visible for comparison. This requires removing Portugal the leading outlier. Because Brazil and Portugal have similar %'s I felt comfortable with this less traditional edit, knowing that the full difference between the "best" and "worst" countries for gender equality in research publishing was represented.
+ Revision 2
All countries except for the two "best", one "worst", and the data point I assumed was most relevant to the Economist's audience (EU28) are shown. This creates a cleaner graph that is less likely to cause a reader's attention to slip before they can process the general snapshot of the data being shown.